In the Morning I woke up and I was ready to watch the All Blacks game.They were playing the Wallabies and the wallabies were trying to beat the best team in the world. So they played the Wallabies and they started good in the first half. But then when it was the 2nd half they didn't do so well. So the Wallabies tried their best but they didn’t get the win they wanted. After the game, the coach of the Wallabies was so mad and angry because the coach wanted to get that win but it didn’t work. But the All Blacks coach was so happy
Because hes team won. The score was so big it was 13 to Australia and then it was
38 to the All Blacks.
Hi Leonardy, I would have liked to watch this game. Unfortunately I had something on. It sounds like the Wallabies were giving their all, but our team had the best defence. Thanks for writing about it.
ReplyDeleteJust as a little suggestion, you could re-write the third sentence and make it a little shorter. You had already mentioned that the All Blacks were playing the Wallabies, so you could shorten it to, 'The All Blacks started well in the first half'.
Keep up with the awesome writing. Will check out your next one soon.
Hi Leonardy so impressive so glad to hear that your into sports And i makes me want to keep on reading this. XD
ReplyDeleteHola Leonardy!
ReplyDeleteLooks like you have been putting a lot of effort into your Writing! Are you happy that our New Zealand Team has won? Well I think that they have been doing great, don't you think? Well your writing is very well written, Kai te Pai, Keep up the great work Leonardy!
From Petesa :)