leonardy Crazy Motat Adventures

Crazy Motat Adventures

Some friends from school go to Motat with their teacher, but get lost inside of the museum. What kind of adventure do they end up on??...Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

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Planning Space

Beginning: (Characters & Setting)	Y5 and y4 on a trip to motat
Middle: (Problem)	My and my friend’s get stuck at motat
End: (Fix)	It was just a dream.

Start Writing Here:On Tuesday At  Motat me and my friend’s were in the toilet’s.I finished going to the toilet’s and i said to my friend’s hurry up! The bus is gonna go.My friend’s said i am taking a one and they said to me i am gonna take 1 minute.you know how mene minute my friend’s toke in the toilet 10 minute you guy’s take for agish.It was geting late.Me and my friend’s were going were the team were but they were not there.

I was like this to my friend’s were are our team and my friend’s were like this we don't know where our team are.Me and my friend’s went to the front gate and the bus all redy left and me and my friend’s were like nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.Me and my friend’s found shoult in motat and we stad at motat for a night.My friend leone woke me up and i woked up and when i woke up it was my mum i was like this to my mum were am i and my mum said you a at home that was a geem.

Feelings excitement eagerness tired grumpy fascinated embarrassed annoyed afraid surprised glad worried delighted confident	Verbs exploring walking talking yelling running screaming shouting quietly experience eager	Abby Get Smart The Big Machine The big white dome School bags drizzly grey clouds raining Tram ride experience tour arcade games
Nouns teachers Tram ride exhibits Mirror maze exhibitions Old steam train village cars Hands on exhibits Old school room theatre	Adjectives abandoned adventurous large small amazing awesome beautiful creepy weird strange quiet huge enormous Scary	You can turn over a cup without spilling the liquid inside A child can lift a grown up A rainbow will change the order of its colours A magnetic field will work through anything All colours mixed together make white Electricity cannot flow through people like wires